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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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statistics
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 we recapitulate the information like in
africa
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Africa
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 and south
america
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America
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forest
 areas
has
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have
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 been reduced that
why
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is why
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the temparature
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temparature
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temperature
 in their
countries
 has been raised,Asia and Europe have increased their
forest
area
 so that the
temparature
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temperature
 will be normal only, North America and Oceania are
maintaing
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maintaining
 balance with the
forest
area
throught
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through
throughout
thought
 all the years so there is no problem to them .
Best
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The best
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 way to control the
temparature
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temperature
 is to plant new plants ,stop
deforestization
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deforestation
 and reserving
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apply
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forest
 areas .
More
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The more
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 the
countries
 have
the
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apply
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forest
area
 more it will be cool ,more
rains
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rain
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otherwise
 the
countries
 have to face
the
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apply
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global warming ,
less
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fewer
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rains
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rain
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,cyclones etc. If the
countries
 will take care of
deforestization
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deforestation
,they can control the global warming
conditons
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conditions
.More the
countries
 planting new plants , It will helpful for them to have good
cilmatic
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climatic
 and weather conditions .Africa and South
america
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America
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 will face consequences if they
are continue
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continue
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 to decrease their
forest
area
 and
rest
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the rest
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 of the
countres
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countries
 are good with their
forest
area
 .

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words forest, countries, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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