Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

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Dear Mr, My name is Lama and I was on

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flight number N976

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week from London to Vancouver.Unfortunately, when I reached home, I did not find my

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handbag

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hand bag

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.I think I forgot it on the plane.

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, my seat was in

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economy class number W45 and I kept my bag under my leg.

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, the flight was from 6:00 pm until 8:00 pm and we were late for around 40 minutes.

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, my bag is a red and rectangular one with wide zipper on both sides and at the top.

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, I attached a small blue plastic holder to my bed in order to make it easier to be pulled.

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, I have several things inside it,

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, iPhone charger, a small makeup briefcase, a brand new power bank and some science books.

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, I would appreciate it if you can look for my backpack and please, let me know about any relevant updates.I will be waiting for your response. Yours sincerely, Lama

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Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

Since more people are travelling abroad nowadays, it is necessary for individuals to have a greater awareness of other cultures

some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plant and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication hurts young people's reading and writing skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Research shows that business meeting,discussion and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?