Modern building change the character and appearance of towns and cities.The government should insist that new buildings be built in traditional styles to protect cultural identity.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are many cities and towns whose many buildings have been built in different modern styles, which changes the original construction feature of the areas. Some people think the authority should
presist
elude, especially in a baffling way
resist
the new buildings' styles to keep the traditional culture.
However
, I disagree with that because the state should
respect every
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respect, every
era including
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era, including
now and should not restrict the designers' thinking and work. Everyone should
respect every
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respect, every
period of
history including
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history, including
nowadays. Each
era
has its role in the history.
Similarly
, the people have their own lifestyles and
that is
totally different with hundreds or even
thousands years
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a thousand years
thousand years
ago and the building of residents' living and working are different with many years ago which is reasonable. Some individuals might argue that the government should protect the traditional
culture including
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culture, including
the buildings, but that does not mean that people should not build
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
new
styles
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style
architectures.
Hence
, the better method could protect the traditional style architectures one side, and admit the exist of the new buildings.
This
would make not only to keep cultural
identity but
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identity, but
also
to have
era
identity. On
contrary
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the contrary
, insisting the construction styles could limit people's creativity. An essential element for the designers is creativity. If a local authority forbid
architecturers
an architectural product or work
architectures
to create
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create
some new
styles
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style
buildings, which means there will be no new style architecture built and there will be no development in
this
field.
For example
,
wu
a dialect of Chinese spoken in the Yangtze delta
Wu
yuan, a small town of China, keep the every building style as hundreds years ago. It attracts a lot of tourists around the world, but
there
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they're
never born an excellent construction designers nearly few decades. In conclusion, it is unreasonable to let the authority to limit the new architectures' styles, because
this
is not ideal to respect the new
era
and will restrict the creativity of the designers.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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