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Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and situations by others in the same age. This is called "peer pressure". Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages.

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It is an undeniable truth that youngsters are encouraged by their friends, parents and teachers.
However
, they are more influenced by their friends because of their similar ages and understandings.
This
 phenomenon has both pros and cons which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will discuss in
this
further
 essay. There are myriad advantages of
such
 influence. To initiate with, the knowledge and experience they gain by each others company. To explain it more
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 would say that, every child needs someone with whom they can share their happiness and sorrows and if, they are their friends they feel more comfortable with them to share anything.
Moreover
, They can learn an important life skill by encouraging each others like, good communication skills and leadership skills and
this
 helps them in
shorting
an operation that segregates items into groups according to a specified criterion
sorting
 out many difficulties in their life. Despite having many Benefits of peer pressure, it has some limitations too.
To begin
 with the adoption of bad habits, If any young child is influenced by the person of his age who smoke and drink, they may
also
 involve in that bad
habits
Suggestion
habit
.
Furthermore
, Inspiring wealthy people
also
 creates inequality
in person's life
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in a person's life
.
For instance
, if youngsters are encouraged by rich people there may be a chance that they demand for the expensive gifts from their parents, which they could not afford. To conclude and give my
opinion i
Accept comma addition
opinion, I
opinion I
 would say that, encouragement always provides
platform
Suggestion
a platform
 to do something challenging and interesting and as similar to
this
 if
youg
(used of living things especially persons) in an early period of life or development or growth
young
 ones follow others positively it will help them more to grow well.
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