The system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter. * Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly. * Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbors. * Suggest what should be done about the problem.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter with a dejected feeling due to some of the prevailing concerns in our community with the way the rubbish is handled. As we
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live at the Pinehurst condos which is closer to the municipal office,
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better service in handling the garbage was expected.
However
, to our
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the concerned department, which handles the trash collection has not
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up for about three weeks now. Our community
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the newest in the surroundings was built in about 10 acres of land and accommodating around 250 units.
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, it is not feasible for the leasing office to
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extra dump areas and the existing one's have about two dumpsters each
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is completely full. The extra litter sits on the floor, causing tremendous inconvenience to the pedestrians and spreading the foul smell around. I would like to request you to pass an internal order to the appropriate department to act on
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and proceed with the rubbish collection as soon as possible. Looking forward
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your kind response on
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. Yours faithfully, Nishanth
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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