The system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter. * Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly. * Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbors. * Suggest what should be done about the problem.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter with a dejected feeling due to some of the prevailing concerns in our community with the way the rubbish is handled. As we

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live at the Pinehurst condos which is closer to the municipal office,

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better service in handling the garbage was expected.

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, to our

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the concerned department, which handles the trash collection has not

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up for about three weeks now. Our community

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the newest in the surroundings was built in about 10 acres of land and accommodating around 250 units.

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, it is not feasible for the leasing office to

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extra dump areas and the existing one's have about two dumpsters each

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is completely full. The extra litter sits on the floor, causing tremendous inconvenience to the pedestrians and spreading the foul smell around. I would like to request you to pass an internal order to the appropriate department to act on

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and proceed with the rubbish collection as soon as possible. Looking forward

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your kind response on

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. Yours faithfully, Nishanth