Some people think it is more important to provide parks and sports facilities than to provide shopping centers in these new town for people to spend their free time. To what extent doo you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, an increasing number of new towns have been constructed because of the development of urbanization. Citizens expect to live in functional communities. Some people consider it necessary to build parks and sports facilities rather than shopping
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
as public space. But I disagree with
this
statement. Common parks and sports facilities help people to live a more satisfying life. One benefit of building parks and sport facilities is that provide local people with places to take exercise there. In modern society, many health problems
such
as diabetes and cardiovascular disease are caused by people’s sedentary lifestyle. Running or playing badminton in the
park which
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park, which
has a lot of trees and beautiful flowers would definitely enhance physical health for individuals. Apart from being as outdoor sports fields, the parks are
also
perfect places
to
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for
communicating with friends or families, which can build a close friendship or
strong family relationship
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a strong family relationship
.
For example
,
man
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a man
and woman could
lying
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lie
lay
on grass and listening to each other, which is a really relaxing way to strengthen a relationship. At the same time, visiting shopping
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
is indispensable for modern life. People all over the world like to spend leisure time in shopping malls. These days, it seems that plazas have become the
multifunctional
sites
besides
buying something needed regularly. Shopping
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
Centers
centre
offering stores, sit-down restaurants, cinemas, amusement parks and more.
For example
, lovers could watch a romantic movie
first
and
then
have a candlelight dinner during the weekends, which is of value to their relationship. To sum up, public parks, sports facilities and shopping
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
are all equally important public spaces. Designers should consider all of them when governments plan to build a new town

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