Overpopulation in many big cities in the world is a major problems. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
In the complicated nowadays, cities seem to be quite over-populated and that has become a major problem in some countries. There are several reasons and solutions to tackle the problem.
To begin
Linking Words
, industrialization and modernization are the main causes of over-populated in cities.
That is
Linking Words
the more industrial
Suggestion
the most industrial
zones, the more job opportunities have been created, which leads to a great deal of people from rural areas would migrate to metropolitan in order to seek for a better job. Some industrial zones
such
Linking Words
as A Sao, Tan Binh, and so on, which are located in Ho Chi Minh City,
for example
Linking Words
, allow thousands of labour to work and stay there. Another reason is that the birth rate in cities has increased in recent years. Thanks to the modernization, families who now have greater living conditions want to have more children. Some actions need to be taken to tackle the problem.
Firstly
Linking Words
, the government should publish a new law which enacted each family could only have at most 2 children.
For example
Linking Words
, the authorities in of China
also
Linking Words
enacted a similar law that allows families to have one child only and somewhat controlled the natural birth rate in its country.
Secondly
Linking Words
, the government should pay more attention to industrialization and modernization in rural areas to make it an ideal destination for the domestic labour market.
Linking Words
Thus not
Accept comma addition
Thus, not
only encouraging local people to work and stay in their hometown, but the
development
Suggestion
developer
also
Linking Words
attracts a great number of people who come to work there. In conclusion, there are still many reasons which cause overpopulation in big cities.
As a result
Linking Words
, the government should immediately take several actions to deal with the major issue.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • overpopulation
  • urbanization
  • slums
  • sanitation facilities
  • traffic congestion
  • pollution levels
  • public services
  • decentralized development
  • population pressure
  • rural areas
  • public transportation systems
  • affordable housing
  • urban poor
  • family planning
  • reproductive health services
What to do next:
Look at other essays: