Many people believe that having a fix punishment for all crime is more efficient. What are the advantage and disadvantages of having a fix punishment?

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think that fix suffering is more efficient than not because all the people will be aware about the discipline

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the particular case. I

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think that there will be hard discipline for any of the

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crime

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crimes

. If criminal will be aware about the

punishment

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there will be less

crime

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in the country. If any person will know that the

punishment

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for the rape case is death

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punishment

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punishment, then

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the rapist must think before doing rape. By fixing

punishment

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for every

crime

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there will be advantages and disadvantages

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. Some of the advantages are mentioned below. All the people will be aware about the

punishment

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of the particular

crime

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and there will be no time wastage in the courts that what type of

punishment

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will be given to the criminal. Everyone will be afraid of hearing

punishment

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. Crimes will

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be less. Whether some of the disadvantages will

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be there of having fix

punishment

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. If

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will not be hard,

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people will make same mistakes in the future that no problem little amount of fine is there we will pay. People will start judging the criminals itself as they will be aware about the

punishment

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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201 words

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