Many people believe that having a fix punishment for all crime is more efficient. What are the advantage and disadvantages of having a fix punishment?

Yes, I
also
think that fix suffering is more efficient than not because all the people will be aware about the discipline
for
Suggestion
of
the particular case. I
also
think that there will be hard discipline for any of the
crime
Suggestion
crimes
. If criminal will be aware about the
punishment
,
then
there will be less
crime
in the country. If any person will know that the
punishment
for the rape case is death
punishment
Accept comma addition
punishment, then
then
the rapist must think before doing rape. By fixing
punishment
for every
crime
there will be advantages and disadvantages
also
. Some of the advantages are mentioned below. All the people will be aware about the
punishment
of the particular
crime
and there will be no time wastage in the courts that what type of
punishment
will be given to the criminal. Everyone will be afraid of hearing
punishment
. Crimes will
also
be less. Whether some of the disadvantages will
also
be there of having fix
punishment
. If
punishment
will not be hard,
thenthen
Suggestion
then then
people will make same mistakes in the future that no problem little amount of fine is there we will pay. People will start judging the criminals itself as they will be aware about the
punishment
.

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    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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