Many people believe that having a fix punishment for all crime is more efficient. What are the advantage and disadvantages of having a fix punishment?

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think that fix suffering is more efficient than not because all the people will be aware about the discipline
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the particular case. I
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think that there will be hard discipline for any of the
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crime
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crimes
. If criminal will be aware about the
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,
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there will be less
crime
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in the country. If any person will know that the
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for the rape case is death
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punishment
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punishment, then
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the rapist must think before doing rape. By fixing
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for every
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there will be advantages and disadvantages
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. Some of the advantages are mentioned below. All the people will be aware about the
punishment
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of the particular
crime
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and there will be no time wastage in the courts that what type of
punishment
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will be given to the criminal. Everyone will be afraid of hearing
punishment
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. Crimes will
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be less. Whether some of the disadvantages will
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be there of having fix
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. If
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will not be hard,
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people will make same mistakes in the future that no problem little amount of fine is there we will pay. People will start judging the criminals itself as they will be aware about the
punishment
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