Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#individuals #environment #governments #companies #difference

I strongly disagree with the above statement that we people can do nothing with our surroundings. It is totally depending on

of or belonging to us

our

people that how we can

revolution

Suggestion

revolutionize

revolutionise

our society or our near about areas.

First

of all,

its

it is

it's

our moral duty to clean our home and outside our home. If everyone will clean their surroundings,

then

automatically the whole environment will be clean and green. What an administration or multinational companies can do for

environs

Suggestion

the environs

For example

, an organization or administrator plants saplings outside our homes or a park near to our home,

then

who will take care of those, who will feed water to those. If we people will do something for our atmosphere,

then

we can shift it. Nobody can

modification

Suggestion

modify

the environs. All the people can transition.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

131 words

<40

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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environmental awareness
sustainable practices
renewable energy
carbon footprint
waste reduction
conservation
ecosystem
pollution
climate change
responsibility
leadership
legislation
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collaboration
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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Universities should take the same number of man and women in each major. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choisces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some children start school when they are seven years old, while others start at the age of four.what could be the advantages and disadvantages of starting school very early.