Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The ideas that,
of spending time on television and games, it is wiser for
children to spend
children, spend
children spend
leisure time on reading books, which causes one of the most hotly debated topics. As a bookworm, I absolutely agree that books are not only human’s best friends but
be inspired teachers. On the one hand, both movies and games, which have great influence on youths, can cause devastating
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
issues. As depending on TVs or laptops for many hours without moving, not only young
people but
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people, but
elder obviously turn into couch potatoes as well as having trouble about
disease, backs.
As a result
, these media divides play a vital role in preventing them from interaction with others or going out for physical exercise.
, at children’s ages, having absorbed many violence scenes might impact on shaping their personalities, which leads to violent
manner of acting or controlling yourself
, becoming
less patience
less patient
or even like using objects to fight someone.
On the other hand
, books are not costly but extremely valuable in comparison with the others by providing plenty of benefits for several reasons. The
reason is that it is undeniable that reading is a good hobby have been widely chosen by famous people and millionaires.
For example
, Warrant Buffet, one of the richest people all around the world, estimated that he spent 80% of his working day reading and thinking. The
reason is that
broadening knowledge, intelligence as well as improvement of outlook for readers, books
a good teacher for children. Based on the
kinds of books, children have many chances to collect the most suitable ones to be
friend which
friends, which
friends which
can illuminate their childhood and forming
themselves. In conclusion, I strongly believe that to avoid devastation children’s childhood, parents shall let them be friends with stories.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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