Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

In
this
modern world, many people are reckoned to think that travelling to remote areas is a better experience, while some differ with it. In
this
essay, I will discuss both merits and demerits of
such
an approach along with the relevant examples. On the one hand, travelling to
such
places can be a whole new experience for anyone, as one can get away from the humdrum and feel relaxed and peaceful.
For example
, it is getting quite common for people to travel to the Himalayas to meditate and gain inner peace, as compared to the crowded tourist places.
Secondly
, a lot of people love to experience challenges and difficult conditions.
This
is because, they are not able to pursue that in their daily routine life.
For instance
, many people from desk jobs love to trek mountains as they don't get enough physical activity during the week. If they don't pursue
such
challenges, they would eventually get bored of their monotonous life.
On the other hand
, visiting
such
places can have a lot of negatives as well. One of the major disadvantages is the connectivity issue in case of an emergency.
This
is because,
such
places are usually in remote areas and have less towers resulting in transportation and communication problems.
For example
, according to a recent study, if someone gets hurt in the Sahara desert, it would take 3 days to provide enough medication.
Moreover
,
such
extreme weather conditions are not good for health as well, as our body can only adapt to an environment up to a certain extent. In conclusion, even though, visiting extreme and remote locations can be adventurous and soothing for one's soul, it is important to consider the health and connectivity issues that might arise due to travelling to
such
locations.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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