In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Job
market is very competitive sector in present day society
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society, hence
hence
employers have to consider lots of factors when they select employees to their organization. Some organizations conduct very strict interview for their selection. They said that they considered experiences than qulifications
. When they make their an attribute that must be met or complied with and that fits a person for something
qualifications
qualification
job
description and job
application they will include some personal questions like hobbies, marriage status and interest. That criteria help employers to get an idea about new member they are going to select.
My opinion is, personal information need
to our workplace. Employers should have an idea about their employees. They can compare status and characteristics of new member with their working Suggestion
needed
condition
and organizational goal Suggestion
conditions
furthermore
, employers can select the best employee who have
close adaptation Suggestion
has
with
their Suggestion
to
organization
environment. Instance for, "Star garments" at Katunayake is conducted series of interview when they select their new members. They include different type activities that can extract personal characteristics and interest of their Suggestion
organizational
candidats
. Human resource manager of The Star garments said that they want skilled, a politician who is running for public office
candidates
candidate
Knowledgable
and specially adaptable employees highly educated; having extensive information or understanding
knowledgeable
moreover
, he said that they want to minimize their job
turn over
as well as improve their productivity. He said that personal details clearly indicate all of the ratio of the number of workers that had to be replaced in a given time period to the average number of workers
turnover
above factors
.
Sometimes emergency situations can be generated at our work Suggestion
the above factors
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place
piece
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accident, perhaps
this
type of details may be important.
Some people disagree with this
because they do not like express their personal information. I don't have idea about this
type of people. I think it depend
on their Suggestion
depends
perception
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perception, however
however
definitely they put into big truble
during find a source of difficulty
trouble
troubles
good
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good jobs
a good job
job
in present-day.
Finally
, I would like to say, personal informations
a message received and understood
information
are
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is
helpful employer
to select the best one.Suggestion
a helpful employer
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