The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007.

The diagram illustrates the quantity of
h
our
of or belonging to us
our
weekly that younger used their leisure to doing certain activities in Chester in the period from 2002 to 2007. Overall, it is clear that there was an increase in the
amount
of
hour
which younger spend going to pubs/ discos, and watching
TV
and shopping
also
share the same trend, in which watching
TV
was the most popular
activity
. While the
amount
of free time that younger spend doing homework, doing sport and bowling
activity
groups decreased over each year, with bowling was the
activity
group less common. In 2002, going to pubs/ discos was the
activity
group with the lowest
amount
of
hour
to 5%, compared to approximately 25% of watching
TV
and 7% of shopping. By 2007, watching
TV
and going to pubs/ discos were rose moderately about 37% and 17% in the given diagram layout period, while the figure for shopping was 15%. There was a fluctuation in the
amount
of
hour
that younger spend free time watching DVDs. Doing homework, doing sport and bowling were three v
irous
characterized by forceful and energetic action or activity
vigorous
group with the highest
amount
of
hour
to 13%, 10% and 4% respectively. Obviously, by 2007, these three groups tended to decline in the
amount
of
hour
that adolescents who spend time activities.

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