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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

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Children's spend most of the time with the parents beside
this
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 children's will always try to copy the parents. In
this
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 essay I'm going to discuss if the family is the best teachers,
also
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 I will share my opinion with
supportive
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supporting
 examples.
First
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 of all we need to think what is
best way
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the best way
 to
confince
make (someone) agree, understand, or realize the truth or validity of something
convince
confine
 the children to
studay
be a student; follow a course of study; be enrolled at an institute of learning
study
 or to listen to the students in the schools, the parents need to understand the topics which they
mostly
Suggestion
most
 like and the topics which the don't like to build a bridge with the youngest. Once we they understand these points they can start explain to the children about the school and why
it
it is
it's
importent
of great significance or value
important
 for them and what is the
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
 for the future.
My parents they
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My parents, they
 used to tell me everyday the school is
most important thing
Suggestion
the most important thing
 in your life with
education
Suggestion
an education
 you can't do anything in your life. My father is a teacher he used to spend 3 hours everyday to teach me all the topics I was always prepared and excited to study with and I had a
dreams
Suggestion
dream
 to be like him when I grow up.
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Finally I
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Finally, I
higly
to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
highly
 agree the family is the
first
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 and the best teacher for all
generations they can
Suggestion
generations, they can
 give a proper information and prepare the children for the future.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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