You have been facing lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work / office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems

Dear sir, I'
m
writing
this
letter to you about the issues I have been facing In my work recently. After 2 years in
this
company
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the new joiners are trying to find any mistake against me just to go ahead and complain so they can take my position.
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this
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the attitude
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they
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the
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show to me is unacceptable at all they have to respect me because I'
m
their senior. I'
m
really disappointed because I'
m
always trying to support my colleagues and provide them coaching,
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, in case they did anything wrong,
however
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they are not doing the same to me as any mistake for Them its very complex and it should be reported on the spot.
First
of
all
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I would like to share my expectations from
this
company after being a senior officer, I want staff from the audit department to check our tasks weekly basis. Adding to
this
I wanted the company to review my salary as the
last
time I got
increment
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was one year back.
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this
I want my title to be a senior officer, which will force my colleges to respect me and change their attitude
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me. Apart from
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I want to share with you my expectations from you as Manger, I want you to spend more time along with us to evaluate our work
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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