Countries are becoming more and more similar because of people able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think is it a positive or negative development?

Globalisation has made accessible of mostly everything in everywhere
of
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in
the
world
(global village), most of the things are available almost everywhere without any geological barriers.
Therefore
, everyone can
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their needs by buying what they want from everywhere
of
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in
the
world
. I personally believe that it is a positive development for mankind. There are many benefits of
this
modernised
world
. With the advent of Technology everyone
know
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knows
about others' culture, trend, food, brands, etc. Because of that
this
such
kind of things can easily get anywhere, though they are bank made in other countries.
For example
, Volkswagen cars are manufactured in Germany but still they are available globally almost in every country. These things help to boost the economy of a nation.
Similarly
, Afghan's traditional attire (traditional name
kurta
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Kurta
cute
pyjama
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pyjamas
pajama
) is very popular among Indians and western dresses are
gained
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gaining
popularity are over the
world
, the availability of these thanks
is only be
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has only been
only is
possible after introducing internet (which is the main factor to make globalized universe).
In addition
English is the international language which is
native language
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the native language
of Britain;
however
, now it is spoken almost in every corner of the
world
. In conclusion, I think the benefits of
this
development important for developing a better Universe
then
now.

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