Some people say that globalization will lead to a loss of cultural identity. Others think that globalization will result in world peace and harmony. To what extent do you agree with either sentence?

The modern world is bringing

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people closer and closer. It is widely believed that

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in the disappearance of traditions and

cultures

, but others rate it as a source of peace and harmonious communities. Though it has adverse effects on

cultures

, the advantages of the society are much heavier, so, I agree with the positive side of the impacts. The local traditions and

cultures

are on the verge of extinction with the formation of the global village. The invention of

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communications, especially in the form of the internet and fast transportation, has placed

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individuals across the globe in

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leads to

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awareness about lifestyles and new trends,

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, similarities in

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language,

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and housing are on the rise.

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and education,

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are settling in different cities worldwide.

Thus

, creating communities of multi-linguistic and multi-ethnic bases with a range of various ways of living. The consequences are an amalgamation of

cultures

and the native

cultures

have started vanishing.

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, New York represents around 40 different ethnicities, all adapted to resembling daily lives.

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, there are examples of many people, maintaining their original traditional methods. Despite the

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drawbacks, it is strongly argued that

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world peace is resulting from

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globalization.

Firstly

, the modern communication gadgets

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quite helpful to law enforcement agencies.

For instance

, location services and contact tracing serve to apprehend the culprits and are legal tools in today's forensic laboratories.

Secondly

, the people have developed friendships across the globe, thanks to the technology. In that, they understand each other in the best ways and clear many misconceptions about

cultures

, religions and races.

Consequently

, the harmony is on the rise.

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, Facebook, WhatsApp and other tools have brought billions of natives from thousands of miles in contact. I think these are the biggest and heaviest positive points which outweigh the negative implications on identities, that

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personal and communal efforts. In conclusion,

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globalization is a source of peace and harmony in the world, despite its manageable deleterious impacts on

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cultures

. I support the viewpoint of the plus points.