The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

This
particular diagram eventually describes how the
electricity
is generated by
water
Suggestion
the water flow
flow
of
river
Suggestion
the river
and where it get stored. At the very
first
sight, the
water
, which comes from the river is stored in a high-level
reservoir
. There is a part of the machine which is called Dam and it remains open in
day
Suggestion
the day
, closed at night. When the dam is open, the
flow
of
water
to generate
electricity
passes by a big pipe which is directly connected to the
power
station. Specifically, the pipe connects
with
Suggestion
to
a generator. Later on, the
water
flow
starts generating
electricity
in
power station
Suggestion
power stations
a power station
.
Electricity
which is generated by the
water
flow
is stored in
national grid
Suggestion
the national grid
through the
power
lines.
On the other hand
, in the night, the
water
flows from the low-level
reservoir
. Reversible
turbines
Suggestion
turbine
pumps
Accept comma addition
pumps, water
water
into high-level
reservoir
. Meanwhile, the
water
flow
from the High-level
reservoir
remains stop, as it only flows during the day time. To sum it up,
this
is the overall mechanism of the hydroelectric
power
station which
Accept comma addition
station, which
predominantly works for
electricity
generation process in
day
Suggestion
a day
the day
days
and stays busy to pump
water
at night.

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