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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Among all the continents, Europe and South
America
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 have the uttermost
surface
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 of forested
land
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 as recorded in 1990, 2000 and 2005, presenting more than 904,000
hectares
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 covering the
land
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 and followed by North
America
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,
Afirca
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Africa
,
Asia
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and Asia
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.
On the other hand
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, Oceania has significantly less forested
land
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of
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almost 200,000
hectares
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. The table shows that during the
3-years-study
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3-year study
 Europe has seen an increase in the
surface
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 of forested
land
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, from 989
hectares
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 in 1990
,
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 to 1001
hectares
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, in 2005.
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, Asia presented an increased forested
surface
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 in 2005, rather than in 2000 or even in 1990, but still represented
aproximatively
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approximately
approximatively
 half of the
surface
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 from Europe.
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, South
America
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 has recorded a decrease from 946
hectares
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 in the first year to 882
hectares
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 in the
third
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 year.
Similarly
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, Africa had in 2005 not
as
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have as
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 many trees as in 1990. As for North
America
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, Asia and Oceania, no
singicant
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significant
 changes were recorded by specialists, only slight differences.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "similarly".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, surface, land, hectares with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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