In Britain when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other people where the nurses look after them.sometimes the government has to pay for this care.who do you think should pay,the government or the family?

In the past few years
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there has been an immense increase in the number of the older citizens. Deciding
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either his family or the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
should pay his expenses, has become the burning question globally. In my opinion, the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
should cover his expenses due to a number of reasons.
Firstly
, the state has a
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
through which it runs its system and generates money for its people.
Secondly
, as long as, the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
provides enough job opportunities to make money for the
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better living
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then
I think that the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
should take the responsibility for the expenses. While looking at the family, one must not let go of the fact that there are some families who cannot afford the expenses,
for example
, a man is residing with a poor family who are not well off to buy him the medicines etc. ''An old man becomes a child'', according to the quote, a child is born out of an old man
furthermore
, he needs someone who can listen to him, take care of him just like a baby.

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