Some people say that we should not encourage sport games among schools because they lead to competition rather than cooperation. To what extend do you agree or disagree with?

In School along with study curriculum we should have sports to balance students physical and mental conditions. People and some parents say that g
ames
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game
between schools should not be encouraged as they lead to competitive tendency rather than cooperation. I strongly oppose
this
statement, Students in every s
chools
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school
should participate in g
ames.
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the games
The essay below has some reasons with examples. Schools should allow their students to participate in sports with others from different schools, which will help them to know each other’s and will have a chance to meet them. Even though there will be
competition
between t
hem they
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them, they
will come to know about believe in themselves and in teamwork. In
this
fast developing and sophisticated world younger students should have c
ompetitive spirit
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a competitive spirit
to cope up. Some people say
instead
of cooperation they develop
competition
by encouraging sports among them. To what extent they can prove that. If a team is playing any game, will have to cooperate each other to win the game.
Although
they need
competition
spirit to win against another team. s
o,
to a very great extent or degree
So
for the sports we need to have both
competition
and cooperation to win against o
ther.
any of various alternatives; some other
another
I totally disagree the statement and had the reasons for it. Students without competitive thoughts will not have a strength to withstand in
this
21st century. Every school must include sports in their curriculam with other school students

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