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Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?

#food #change #people
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The most important three things
is
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are
 to lead a
life
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 in
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 world are
food
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, shelter, cloths.
Food
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 is one of the essential needs for human beings to survive in
life
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. In these modern days people have invented varieties of method to prepare
food
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.
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 improvement has definitely made it better to our
life
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 style. Producing of new things helps us in future.
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, the way of preparing
food
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 it depends on their culture, race, and country. The need of preparing
food
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 is to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 the human hunger. Preparing the
food
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 was very difficult in
past days but
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the past days, but
the past days but
by
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of
 the human knowledge men have created many devices and made many new methods of easily making foods. Nowadays,
large number
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a large number
 of fast
food
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 shops and restaurants are increasing and that has made people stopped to cook
food
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 at home. The advanced technology
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 as rice cooker, meal cooker and many more other help people to
prepare
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prepare food on
food
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 in on
time
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, which made improvement of
life
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 style of people. In these days people spend less
time
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 in preparing
food
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 and use the
time
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 for the professional task like reading, spending
time
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 with family and other things.
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 people become more social because of the increased
time
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 which they have. Fast
food
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 has become more popular which makes the people to neglect of cooking at home. Even the businessman, students, teachers, professionals
are having
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is having
 those foods during lunch
time
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.
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 is
significant improvement
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a significant improvement
 in saving
time
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 and used it in profitably way. Though fast
food
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 has some health issues, still people are busy in their
life
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 and not aware of the junk foods. The cooking products
helps
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help
 the people to cook the
food
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 easily and not spending much
time
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 in the hot kitchen to prepare
food
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.
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 leads to modern
life
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 which
food
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 can be prepared within few minutes. To conclude that nowadays the improved way of cooking helps people to save their
time
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 and can cook in a
comfort
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comfortable
comfy
 place.
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 helps them to spend more
time
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 in important things to lead a good
life
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Modern appliances
  • Pre-packaged meals
  • Cooking time
  • Nutritional value
  • Public health
  • Work-life balance
  • Cultural heritage
  • Food industry
  • Processed foods
  • Packaging waste
  • Social bonding
  • Culinary skills
  • International cuisine
  • Preservatives
  • Additives
  • Contamination
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