These days,mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one anther socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, people way of communication has changed
such
as shell phones, internet etc. There are both sides which are positive developments and negative developments. At present,
in particular
advanced technology has been developed more than in the past.
Therefore
, people can have access internet or get a phone call within a moment and they are easily able to convey messages to the their lovable or colleagues using these tools.It is a huge advantages for the community and they do not want to wait for a long time to get their messages as past. Indeed, people would be able to get know about each others who are living in foreign countries like, their relations
,
Accept space
,
intimates friends through the mobile phones or via internet. In fact, Using search engines google, yahoo or YouTube anyone can get a variety of information academic, historical, economic etc. Young generation would make their friends using social media or hand on their colleagues or getting news from the around the world.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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