In recent years, many local shop owners have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, it is quite common to see a majority of consumers flocking to large malls and shopping

centers whereas

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centres, whereas

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very few customers are opting to buy from local shops

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of which several

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small scaled shops have closed down.In my opinion, the positive aspect of

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development is more significant than its negative aspect.

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essay will discuss why the trend

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shift in preference to large malls is a better option.

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, in modern society where time is phenomenally important, it greatly benefits customers

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all their needs met under a single roof.

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Largest

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shopping malls provide ample facilities

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buyers to ease their shopping as well avail savings in forms of discounts and vouchers.

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, malls provide parking adequate parking facilities often accompanied with valet services

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saving the time wasted in searching for car parking.Not only

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parking, but

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the products malls offer

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of great value to the end user.Just in one place the customer has a variety of goods ranging from clothing

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appliances

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electronics

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stationery and foodstuff.

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, malls offer excellent quality products

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which are

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economical and available in bulk.There is always impeccable customer service where buyers are advised on the latest products and offers.While malls offer shopping options they

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provide cinemas, restaurants, salons and even utility services

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as bills and card payments and pharmacies. In conclusion, the advantages of shopping malls far outweigh the disadvantages.In the fast paced life of

today nobody

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today, nobody

has the time to check out small shops individually and huge shopping

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an area that is approximately central within some larger region

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are more a necessity than a luxury

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and definitely

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these malls are here to stay.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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