People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.

Fuel is mandatory for any type of transport. Most of all types of transports
are depends
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are depended
depend
on the fossil fuels which comes from the earth core. These fossil
fuels'
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fuel
fuels
combustion generates toxic gases which
causes
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cause
environmental issues. Some people think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems, but it
dosen't seems
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doesn't seem
doesn't seems
like a permanent solution
for
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to
the environmental issues. There are a lot arguments to support my statement.
Firstly
environmental problems are caused different causes, combustion of fossil
fules
a substance that can be consumed to produce energy
fuels
are
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is
one of those reasons. We should concentrate on each and every aspect to
controll
power to direct or determine
control
the environmental
cahanges
cause to change; make different; cause a transformation
changes
. We must stop
deforestration
the state of being clear of trees
deforestation
, dumping chemicals into rivers, excessive use of water
resourses
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
etc..., all these acts
causes
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cause
environmental changes like global
warmig
the process of becoming warmer; a rising temperature
warming
. As some people's point of we must stop using fossil fuels, at least try to use less, but
increasing cost
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the increasing cost
of fuel is not a solution. Our whole
economical
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economic
system depends on
fules
record in a public office or in a court of law
files
now a days, so increasing prices of the fuels will
causes
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cause
more chaos in the society.
Instead
we should create
awerness
having knowledge of
awareness
on fossil fuels in the society to reduce the usage of the fuels. Industries, governments must concentrate on other alternatives of fossil fuels. Implementing the alternatives to fossil fuels will make
change
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changes
gradually.
This
only alternative to protect our environment from the climate change. To conclude, we should look into the safe alternatives to fossil fuels
instead
increasing prices on the fuels.

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