Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, because of numerous human activities and overpopulation, the environment is on the verge of being destroyed. In the opinion of experts from both developed and developing countries,
instead
of finding a solution to rectify the drastic
climate
change
, we should deem new methods of living with
this
substantial condition. According to my verdict, the idea of not untangling the extreme climatic
change
is completely preposterous, but for short term trying to accommodate is not entirely wrong.
Firstly
, unraveling the
climate
condition caused abundant money and handful of resources, which could be unendurable for developing countries.
Moreover
, rectifying the environmental issues that caused
climate
change
could be very time-consuming and hectic.
Although
human survival is directly dependent on
climate
condition, various life threatening issues are
also
existed which demand hotfoot solution.
For example
, the contagious and life threatening disease corona virus needs more attention to make the vaccine and be curable. Because of
this
disease the death rate is 56%, and it is very alarmingly
high
Suggestion
higher
than death rate due to
climate
changes.
Verily
, there are other serious issues that need urgent solution, but the idea of not taking measures to control
climate
hazards is completely outrageous. Extreme
climate
change
not only dangerous for human survival, but
also
for animals and other natural habitat.
For instance
, the Forest fires in Australia and many other regions which disturb the natural ecosystem of many animals, are the result of extreme
climate
changes. Legislation and serious measures should be done by government to prevent and rectify drastic
climate
changes.
Furthermore
,
climate
problem leads to many severe problems like water depletion, shortage of natural resources, and environmental pollution. To conclude, the idea of not preventing extreme
climate
problems is wholly ridiculous.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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