Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

There is no doubt that these days almost every adult is having a car and
this
is affecting the traffic and the environment,
however
, the question: Do governments have to take any action to stop people getting cars? Is being a controversial issue nowadays, while I tend to believe that societies should encourage the use of public
transport
and make it applicable to everyone.In
this
essay I am going to examine
this
phenomenon from both viewpoints. On
one
side of the argument, there are people who argue that no
one
can stop individuals from buying cars because it is a requirement to achieve all your work easily and rapidly.
Furthermore
, these people argue that government is not being attention to the importance of the public
transport
and it needs various improvements in order to make it suitable for their daily usage.
One
good example here is the number of cars in Kuwait which increases hugely during the past 30 years.
In addition
, street's infrastructure did not develop for a long time.
Although
, each family is buying cars for each member, they believe that government is not doing anything towards improving streets and public transportation.
On the other hand
, it is
also
possible to consider it with the opposing case.Governments should be strict in allowing people to buy cars,
for example
, each family must have
one
car only and if they will buy
one
more car, its price should be tripled and a penalty applied.
Moreover
, public
transport
has to be more effective and active and each human has to be encouraged to use it.
One
good illustration here is the United States.In the huge states, parking lots are expensive, so individuals have to use the public
transport
. In conclusion, as we have seen there is no easy answer to
this
question, while, I guess all governments can force citizens to reduce the number of cars if they can provide better options and alternatives.

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