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The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999
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The given line graph illustrates the
amount
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 of stolen vehicles in four countries, namely Great Britain, Sweden, France and Canada over a decade. It can be noticed that the rate of robbery in Great Britain took the lead for the whole period,
whereas
 France and Canada showed
opposing
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 trend for Sweden. In 1990, The greatest amount of
the
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theft was in Great Britain.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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