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4. Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Tourism
 is considered to be one of the
factor
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factors
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for
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relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
developing
 the economy of any nation. The more the
tourism
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tour
 better will be the financial condition of any country will be. In my
opinion it
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opinion, it
 is true that
tourism
 is vital for the
countries but
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countries, but
 with that it has some disadvantage
too
in the direction of
to
 which will be discussed. One of the biggest benefits is generation of employment to many people. It
include
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includes
 many tourist guider who
get
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gets
 money in
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 from the people who come from
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a broad
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For instance
, a study conducted found that out of hundred twenty percent of the people are working under
this
 industry. Nearly, international
tourism
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also helps
has also helped
 to share the culture of
different country
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different countries
a different country
. It various from food to dressing sense.
However it
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However, it
 has one demerit that sometime Overall, I believe international
tourism
 must be encouraged as it help to develop the economy of the nation.

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