Some people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on the streets.Still there are robberies that happen inside houses.What do you think is the best things that a person can do to ensure his or her own security.Use specific reason and examples to support your answers.

Few people are scared to move out as fright of being
stealed
take without the owner's consent
stolen
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on
road
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the road
.Nowadays,
house breaks
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house, breaks
are
also
occurring.In my opinion learning of some skills for self defence is best to ensure our own safety. Currently, robberies are happening everywhere.The robbers are selecting their targets based on some criteria.They are mainly
focusing
Suggestion
focused
on the house in which is including a single person or vulnerable group.These people cannot stop them from harming others.So the best way to be safe is getting trained in martial arts.
For example
, karate, and Kung Fu.By learning
this
anyone who is being attacked can stop the attacker and escape from him.These art forms makes the people stronger and fearless to go out.
This
develops the confidence, discipline
,
Accept space
,
and focus too.It can help with the body and mind connection.
In addition
, the material arts help with prevention.We can use
this skills
Suggestion
these skills
this skill
against harassments, abuse, and assault as well.At the same time, it encourages personal insight into experiences with violence. We might fail
eventhough
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even though
we had other measures
to
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of
protection.
For instance
, informing to
police
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the police
, using of equipments like pepper spray or sharp things to escape from
unknown
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the unknown
an unknown
.Each
alternatives
Suggestion
alternative
have
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has
its own drawbacks and it might not work during unexpected events due to the shock, which we are experiencing. To conclude, everyone should be trained in martial arts for self protection
eventhough
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even though
, it takes more time to learn.Anyone can use
this
in
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at
anytime in order to ensure the safety not only for
them but
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them, but
also
for others who need help.
Martail
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Martial
Metal
art is the best way to become more secure.

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