Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

In recent decades, parents are getting more aware about their offsprings. They spend a huge amount of money to buy a
toys
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toy
for them. In
this
essay, I shall examine the advantages as well as disadvantages of having a large
number
of toys.
To begin
with, some parents buy toys to make their offspring happy and
also
they believed that having toy in their
life
are more joy able and
also
a great for source of
time
pass. Having toys is
also
more beneficial for their mind development.
In addition
to
this
, it is
oftenly
seen the behaviour of the offsprings who used to spend more
time
with toys are very calm and a very reticent kind of. Their mindset is
also
developing
accordingly
because of that the literacy skills are increasing rapidly due to which they perform
excellent
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excellently
in the academic curriculum. On the other side, it is
also
assumed that having a large
number
of toys and spending more
time
with them is
also
badly effect for offspring health due to which they got depressed and many other diseases. A children's care organisation has recently done their studies on children having large
number
of toys and t they have found that having a large
number
of toys and spending more
time
with them is the main reason of depression and
also
they are unaware about social
life
. The researcher
also
mentioned the lack physical fitness in offspring having large
number
of
time
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times
. In the conclusion, I would like to mention that toys in child
life
are good because they do not make them feel alone, but the parents should
also
spend more
time
to play
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playing
with their children and make them aware about physical fitness and social
life
which are the basic need of human
life
.

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