Obesity is an increasing public health problem in some parts of the world. Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.

There are several reasons why obesity has become
such
a widespread issue
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but there are
also
ways we can solve
this
problem. Many of people eat a lot of junk food, which includes, burgers
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chips, cold drinks, pizza etc.
That is
the one reason obesity has become a serious issue.People are not taking care of their diet
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they ear unhealthy food that causes them fatness. The Other main reason of
this
most of the people, especially kids are too lazy, many of them are busy playing video games on a computer or doing any particular work that does not allow them to participate in a physical activity. Parents should watch and advise their children to do daily exercise.

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