Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is this positive or negative development?

Globalisation brought us the sophistication, which we felt as non mandatory goods a
demobilecade
ago,
such
as electronic gadgets and mobile phones. It becomes one of the fashion code to replace the phone every year, which includes a hefty price.
This
is one of the
example
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examples
, indicates unnecessary spendings in recent years globally. A
breif
of short duration or distance
brief
detail as an introduction, does spending
money
is a sign of positive development?
first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
discuss
on
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about
the good impact. People
goes
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go
are going
out for shopping, keeps them stress free and roaming around shopping malls, get them mind
diversed
of someone whose marriage has been legally dissolved
divorced
diverse
diversity
.
Purchase
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Purchasing
power parity, a scale to measure to country's purchasing capability. A system which
rely
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relies
on a data, how much an individual can spend, which can contribute to
nation's economy
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the nation's economy
and can be
further
developed by the
money
flow. Around the globe, nation's prefer their citizen's to spend more and allow
corporates
to attract the people. It's a good indication, as a
country
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country's
development.
Second
point,
balanced income
Accept comma addition
balanced, income
versus expense always gives us a happy life. Experts say huge
debit
the state of owing something (especially money)
debt
will lead to the mental depression,
such
as
lose
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losing
focus on work and spend less time wife and children. A huge spending leads to less savings, which cannot help you during survival,
such
as job loss and major medical expenses. But, still people are spending more and justifying it. They get more pleasure, but they don't know, it's just temporary. Organise your spendings, try to use an
expenditure
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expensive
app, which helps you
monitroing
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monitor
monitoring
your expenses. Prepare a budget and spend smart. Important to mention it, always allot
money
for
miscellanious
consisting of a haphazard assortment of different kinds
miscellaneous
expenses,
such
as mini trip, gadgets and electronics. Avoid monthly
installments
a payment of part of a debt; usually paid at regular intervals
instalments
, which is one of the
blacksheep
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black sheep
, which will make you not to feel the overload on
temporary basis
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a temporary basis
. Keep least priority on unnecessary things, advertisement is a kind of
a
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an
art and attracts you, says 0% profit and 0% down payment. Always discuss with family members, before considering on a major
expenses
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expense
.
Finally
, A calculated expense is the best way of spending
money
, to secure your future and spending
lot
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lots
on
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of
unwanted things, just let you be happy and it's just
an
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a
nightmare.

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