Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

To stay
heatlhy
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
becoming more difficult in
this
era, people have many
issue
Suggestion
issues
to maintain
there
of them or themselves
their
heatlhy
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
diet in daily routine. The main
casue
give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally
cause
case
course
of
this
problem
is
Suggestion
Is
busy schedule and fast
food
,
Accept space
,
while it can be dominated by giving proper time to diet. To embark with
,
Accept space
,
human being
Suggestion
the human being
have
Suggestion
has
busy schedule in daily routine and they are not getting time for their
heatlhy
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
diet. To be more
preicse
sharply exact or accurate or delimited
precise
prince
, in the era people are doing two jobs and they have no time to cook
thier
of them or themselves
their
food
at home, so they
perfer
like better; value more highly
prefer
to eat
food
from outside like burger, pizza. Along with it, for the taste of mouth
,
Accept space
,
folks love to eat
oustide
beyond the boundary of; external to
outside
food
rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
healhty
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
food
. The survey was conducted by heath
food
department showed that
,
Accept space
,
30% people prefer to eat
food
from the outside rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
to cook at home. These
problem
Suggestion
problems
can be solve
Suggestion
can be solved
if, human
follow
Suggestion
follows
the proper schedule in their daily life, they should have to make
timetable
Suggestion
a timetable
for
thier
of them or themselves
their
food
.

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