Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for this? Is it negative or positive development?

Anyone can see
love
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the love
and care in the eyes of the parents which they have for their kids. The main purpose of the parents to help their child
to grow
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grow
and succeed.
However
, children have given too much stress to get success in their
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
by their parents.
This
essay will analyse the reasons behind
this
pressure
and
also
, the aspects about
this
negative development. With advent of technology, offsprings are always busy on their mobile phones for playing games, watching videos and do chatting on social sites
such
as
facebook
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Facebook
,
whatsapp
,
instagram
and
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expresses possibility
may
more. They have no interest
on
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in
their studies as well as
on
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in
their career.
Besides
this
, emerging western culture in
asian
a native or inhabitant of Asia
Asian
countries
spoil
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spoils
the living way of the residents.
For instance
, in India, kids
have been ruining
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have ruined
their
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
by following
this
culture.
Thus
, parents put
pressure
on their children to become successful in the future.
However
,
this
pressure
has plethora of drawbacks.
Firstly
,
this
will convince one to do suicide or commit any crime. To elaborate
this
, teenagers do not allow anybody to touch their phones or any gadgets, their anger, sometimes, will be at dangerous level to harm someone if somebody even have a finger on its gadgets.
Secondly
,
this
stress leads to mental diseases
such
as depression,
migrain
a severe recurring vascular headache; occurs more frequently in women than men
migraine
problems and these diseases have been rising for years. To conclude, putting
pressure
on their kids by their parents is not a good idea to teach their children about success.
However
, they should properly mentor them about the importance
on
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of
for
success.

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