You are work working for a company.You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this Write a letter to your manager.In you letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Sir or Madam,
The reason why I am addressing you is that I want to explain why I desire to chill out from my
work
as well as
recommend to you how my work
would be useful for you while
I am further
from the office.
I have been working in this
place for many years, and I want some relaxation from work
. I am exhausted from working here. This
is why relaxing helps me come back to my previous statement. Also
, I cannot say my current body is in good shape.
This
is not only an issue, but it also
requires numerous hours of rest. Due of
Change preposition
to
this
,today a lot of people travel with their families, as well as
my family is one of them. Please allow me extra time to do this
.
I appreciate your understanding and support regarding this
matter. The last
thing I want to know is how you covered my work
. During my absence, I recommend that some employees work
instead
of mine. One of them was my friend John, whom he experienced as being like me. I guarantee this
condition for you. Don’t worry. I’ll come back to my workplace.
Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to your response.
Best regards,
Khamidov AliSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Task Achievement
To improve Task Achievement, provide a clearer, more specific explanation of the reasons for the requested time off, including specific examples or situations that lead to your decision. Include precise details on the amount of time needed and offer a clear, feasible plan on how your responsibilities could be managed in your absence.
Coherence and Cohesion
For a better score in Coherence and Cohesion, ensure smooth transitions between paragraphs and ideas. Use linking words effectively to create a logical flow. Maintain a consistent format by addressing the manager directly and respectfully throughout, rather than switching between a formal and informal tone.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite