It is to expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on bhuilding modern buildings instead. To what extent do u agree or disagree?

With trending fashion everyone wants to give modern look to the buildings. Here, some people reckon that taking care and reconstruction of ancient buildings need more money, so rather than spending on it they
should spent
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should spend
on modern buildings
.
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.
I totally disagree with
this
notion and I will
scrutanize
to look at critically or searchingly, or in minute detail
scrutinize
scrutinise
all
view points
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoints
in the upcoming paragraphs
.
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.
To initiate with, it gives more
leverages
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leverage
to the society if they keep their eye on traditional buildings because these are
more stronger
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stronger
than modern ones.
Moreover
, its
maintainence
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
not require
Suggestion
doesn't require
more money if they look after them within
shot period
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a short period
a shot period
of
time
and
also
require less sources to
recunstruct
reassemble mentally
reconstruct
.
For example
, In my
city there
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city, there
are several ancient buildings like Gobind Fort
,
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,
Maharaja Ranjit Singh Killa for the
maintainence
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
of these
government
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governments
lend workers and wages every year because these
are the
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are, the
more tourist attraction of our city which helps to
increse
become bigger or greater in amount
increase
the revenue of our nation.
Additionally
, it takes less
time
to repair only a month or two
,
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,
while building new need more
time
and efforts as well as space
.
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.
Furthermore
,
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,
remolding
act of correcting an error or a fault or an evil
remedying
of these buildings helps us to preserve our culture
,
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,
tradition and history
for
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of
our upcoming generation to get knowledge and information regarding our past.
For example
,
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,
historical buildings which
has
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have
number
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a number
of carvings and
scluptures
a three-dimensional work of plastic art
sculptures
helps to recall our ancient
time
.
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.
Therefore
, it should be imperative to repair old buildings rather than replacing it
.
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.
To recapitulate with, according to my point of
view it
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view, it
should me
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should, I
should I
magnificient
characterized by grandeur
magnificent
to look after old ones in order to increase country's economy
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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