You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Dear Sara, I hope
this
letter finds you well.I will be coming to London
next
month to do my Masters degree in economics and I need your support in finding me a part-time job.
First
, I got a partial scholarship from my university here in Kuwait to study in London.I will be living in London for 2 years because I have to finish 45 credit hours to receive my degree.
Furthermore
, I will not be able to visit Kuwait during the holidays unless I got
a
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well paid
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work.
Second
, I have to get
a work
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immediately in order to cover all my expenses and
also
to improve my practical skills.
Moreover
, I am planning to do internal tourism in the United
Kingdoms
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during my vacations.
Third
, my plan is to get
a part-time work
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in a bank, so I can have the best experience
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along
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my college.
In addition
, I can do any other related job
for instance
, in an accountant company, in a school or in a restaurant.I will appreciate it if you can help me in finding a job before I arrive
next
month.If you can collect
me
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all
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advertisements from the local newspaper, it would be great.
Finally
, I will be waiting for your response and I am looking forward to
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you soon. Yours sincerely, Lama Jaljouli
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Educational aspirations
  • Work experience
  • Financial independence
  • Resume (or CV)
  • Local job market
  • International student
  • Legal requirements
  • Student work permit
  • Employment trends
  • Time management
  • Networking
  • A part-time position
  • Balance studies and work
  • Job hunting strategies
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