You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Sara,
I hope
this
letter finds you well.I will be coming to London next
month to do my Masters degree in economics and I need your support in finding me a part-time job.
First
, I got a partial scholarship from my university here in Kuwait to study in London.I will be living in London for 2 years because I have to finish 45 credit hours to receive my degree.Furthermore
, I will not be able to visit Kuwait during the holidays unless I got a
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apply
well paid
work.
Add a hyphen
well-paid
Second
, I have to get a work
immediately in order to cover all my expenses and Remove the article
work
a job
also
to improve my practical skills.Moreover
, I am planning to do internal tourism in the United Kingdoms
during my vacations.
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Kingdom
Third
, my plan is to get a part-time work
in a bank, so I can have the best experience Remove the article
part-time work
a part-time job
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at
along
my college.Add the preposition
withalong
In addition
, I can do any other related job for instance
, in an accountant company, in a school or in a restaurant.I will appreciate it if you can help me in finding a job before I arrive next
month.If you can collect me
all Correct pronoun usage
apply
related
advertisements from the local newspaper, it would be great.
Correct article usage
the related
Finally
, I will be waiting for your response and I am looking forward to see
you soon.
Yours sincerely,
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seeing
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite