These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or events. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The issue of whether to spend one’s hard earned wages on attending expensive football, rugby or baseball matches or other exclusive diversions as opposed using it more wisely and prudently has become a matter of concern for many. Critics argue that
such
frivolity is a misuse of precious
funds
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funds, however
however
, I personally believe the opposite.
This
essay will discuss why the benefits of attending
sport
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sports
or cultural occasions are worth more than the actual ticket price by using examples taken from the Harvard Business Review and the Woodstock Festival. On the one
hand those
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hand, those
festival goers and sports fans who attend concerts, gigs, matches or athletic competitions happily extol the virtues of these on their overall well-being, both physical and mental. The main reason for
this
is twofold,
firstly
by watching, participating and enjoying a game people’s overactive stress
levels
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level
can be radically reduced.
Secondly
, many
such
important and well-respected events have become a noteworthy opportunity for socializing or networking.
For example
, a recent article published by the Harvard Business Review showed that key, ambitious top executives in the 500 Fortune companies had invested in tickets for basketball games not only for
themselves but
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themselves, but
for their clients aiming to seek distraction and amusement while entertaining and nurturing future business contacts.
Therefore
,
although
it could be suggested that the high price of ticket sales has been exacerbated by powerful
Corporates
of or belonging to a corporation
corporate
or event organizers with sky high budgets, there is no doubt of the positive spin- offs
to
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in
health and business.
On the other hand
, if money is no object,
then
there is overwhelming evidence that going to festivals, attending concerts or investing in experiences is a growing trend which is appreciated because of its ability to build fond and durable memories which
last
a lifetime and become part of a family’s history. An example of
this
was the mythical Woodstock music festival in 1969, which was a peaceful milestone witnessed by thousands of people who have afforded it legendary status.
Thus
, the emotional value of
such
events cannot be overstated. To conclude from the aforementioned arguments, I firmly believe that despite the
frequently
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frequent
prohibitively high prices of attending
sport
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sporting
and cultural events, doing so can be enormously positive and justifiable for the benefits it brings to those who are there. From the significant growth in richly diverse Festivals worldwide, it could be predicted that in the future
this
kind of events will continue to grow in popularity as people elect to spend their earnings on experiences rather than in material goods.

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