The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?

People
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
that prohibition of
add
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the add
is
usefull thing
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a useful thing
useful thing
because
their
in or at that place
there
are damaging
for
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to
our life.
However
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
assure that without advertisement
,
Accept space
,
people
can not
can not
cannot
know about new things that made in
this
time. In my view, advertisement is one of the
part
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parts
of social networks, which helped to know some interesting information about
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
country.
Moreover
, there have various advantages, that can help to society for making money.
Firstly
, there are helping to earn for bloggers, that live with show add other people.
Furthermore
, society can find
useful thing
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useful things
the useful thing
, that can help to
do
engage in
make
life easier.
On the other hand
, there are effect to societies work, that damage
unnessesary
not necessary
unnecessary
necessary
information.
Consequently
, people start to trust for false data, that can damage for
theirselves
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
. In
conlusio
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
n, society
nee
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needs
d to understand that without advertisement they can not know new things that made in
this
twenty
first
century

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