International travel is becoming cheaper and more and more countries open their doors for more tourists. Do the advantage of the increased tourism outweigh it's disadvantages?

It is true that with the advancement in technology since
two three
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two, three
decades communication is certainly faster comfortable and cost effective.
This
has led to increase in the international
tourism
in leaps and bounds.
Although
, some may believe that it has drawbacks. I tend to think that to be large
extent
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extensible
extended
, there are more benefits than risks. My preference is argued
further
. The most obvious advantage is on the economies of developing or underdeveloped countries.
That is
, enhanced
tourism
leds to
prosperity
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prosper
as it gains a significant revenue through it. Due to
this
, they develop their infrastructure to attract more business, which serves a dual tourists as well as elevating the lifestyle of the locals good examples of
this
are India, Nepal, Malaysia and Thailand. It
can not
can not
cannot
be denied that
tourism
generats
bring into existence
generates
a huge and an everlasting demand for
akilled
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a killed
and unskilled workers for many levels of the hospitality industry.
Thus
, innumerable employment opportunities not only does it boost the
art craft
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art, craft
and cottage industries but
also
catalyses business and trade. Simultaneously, a few obstacles should not be overlooked. A country becomes vulnerable to terror attracts and other criminal offences. The governments have to specific amount to maintain the heritage sites which may burden the economy.
Also
,
tourism
can
horm
any physical damage to the body caused by violence or accident or fracture etc.
harm
the local flora and fauna, history and even ethics of people. To conclude, it can be clearly inferred that despite of some threats, that can be tackled by close vigilance,
tourism
an
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a
reality has
provied
established beyond doubt
proved
provided
provide
a
life line
a crease on the palm; its length is said by palmists to indicate how long you will live
lifeline
and a boon to many countries around the world. So increased
tourism
has
definately
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
more gains than risks.

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