The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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There are several similarities between what younger and older

people

say makes them most happy.

However

, there are several striking differences.

Firstly

, let us look at the similarities. It is noticeable that for both younger and older

people

, the highest percentage says that achievement at work brings them most

happiness

: 31% for the younger age group and 32% for the older group. Doing hobbies is

also

very important for both groups: the

second

largest percentage of both age groups mention doing hobbies as making them most happy. Turning now to the differences, many younger

people

regard having a good appearance as extremely important: 18% of them state

this

brings them most

happiness

This

is followed by 15% who state that travel brings them

happiness

. Neither of these two factors is mentioned by older

people

Instead

, 20% of older

people

report that having financial security is most important to their

happiness

and 14% say they feel most happy when they are with their family.

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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