Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

A
person
is considered to be healthy when he takes proper diet
,
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,
does heavy workout and is mentally relaxed.
Firstly
, I believe people should eat healthy in order to stay healthy. We can do
this
by avoiding junk food as we get them at very minimal rates in our country. We should eat different types of salads which are not
healthy but
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healthy, but
are
also
tasty. I feel people should include
lot
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lots
of vegetables and fruits in their diet as they provide fibre. Coconut water is a good source of vitamin -k and provide skin benefits
also
. We should try and avoid sugar
,
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,
though we have
lot
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lots
of festivals which are nothing without sweets. It not only help us gain
weight but
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weight, but
also
harms our body
.
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.
We should drink green tea to relax ourselves. India is all about spices
,
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,
still we can try and use it less in our meals
.
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.
It causes constipation problems.
Its
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It
is best to eat everything before 8 in the evening as it takes time to digest food.
Secondly
, I think everyone should do any physical activity
atleast
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at least
for half an hour a day. Physical activity could be in the form of yoga, aerobics
,
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,
gym
,
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,
running
,
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,
swimming
,
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,
walking or any other. We should try doing our own work. We can start
this
by doing our household work by ourselves
instead
of depending on household help which is very easily available in our country. I
also
feel we should be mentally fit to enjoy our lives. We should not overburden our shoulders with duties and
responsiblities
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibilities
. In the end
,
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,
I would conclude by saying that a
person
should be physically and mentally fit in order to be healthy. A
person
who eats well , takes care of himself well is a happy and a fit
person

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