Public libraries should provide books and not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, videos or DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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, and making many gadgets like software, videos or DVD. I agree with the given statement.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand from 1901 and its predicted year in 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.