Increasing the price of patrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

IELTS-8 Writing task-2 (Test-3
)
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(11:08-11:34) The problems of growing
traffic
and growing environmental
pollution
cannot be solved by increasing the price of
patrol
. Increasing the price of
patrol
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the patrol
will definitely help a
little but
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little, but
it will not have any great impact. Other ways like
use
of public transport and introducing the electric cars or cars that
use
water as a fuel, would be more helpful. Inflation has already affected almost every person in every region of the world, so increasing the price of
patrol
Suggestion
petrol
will not have any greater effect. If the prices of gasoline are raised, people will come to the vehicles which cover more distance in less amount of fuel
as a result
the problem of growing
traffic
will worsen rather than improve. Along with
this
,
pollution
may decrease a bit, but will still be a great problem. So increasing the prices of
patrol
alone cannot help us in addressing the problems of
traffic
and
pollution
. We will have to take some more steps to overcome the
traffic
and
pollution
,
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,
like creating awareness among people regarding the
use
of public transport and introducing the engines which run on electricity or water. Both these steps will help us in a great way.
As a result
of increased usage of public buses and trains,
traffic
on roads will not grow at the exponential rate, as it is growing now. The measure will help us a lot in maintaining the growth of
traffic
more efficiently.
Although
the
use
of public transport can help in reducing the
traffic but
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traffic, but
for the problem of
pollution
, we will need to take one more step. We will have to support the universities and
engineers both
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engineers, both
financially and emotionally, so that
hydropower
and electrical power engines could be introduced in the market.
As a result
of
which,
Suggestion
pollution, which
pollution
can be handled. So, only by increasing prices of gasoline
alone we
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alone, we
cannot
workout
Suggestion
work out
the solution to these two major problems of
traffic
and
pollution
, but some extra measures would be really helpful to us.

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