Increasing the price of patrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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(11:08-11:34) The problems of growing

traffic

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and growing environmental

pollution

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cannot be solved by increasing the price of

patrol

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. Increasing the price of

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patrol

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the patrol

will definitely help a

little but

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little, but

it will not have any great impact. Other ways like

use

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of public transport and introducing the electric cars or cars that

use

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water as a fuel, would be more helpful. Inflation has already affected almost every person in every region of the world, so increasing the price of

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patrol

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petrol

will not have any greater effect. If the prices of gasoline are raised, people will come to the vehicles which cover more distance in less amount of fuel

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the problem of growing

traffic

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will worsen rather than improve. Along with

this

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,

pollution

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may decrease a bit, but will still be a great problem. So increasing the prices of

patrol

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alone cannot help us in addressing the problems of

traffic

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and

pollution

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. We will have to take some more steps to overcome the

traffic

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and

pollution

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,

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like creating awareness among people regarding the

use

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of public transport and introducing the engines which run on electricity or water. Both these steps will help us in a great way.

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of increased usage of public buses and trains,

traffic

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on roads will not grow at the exponential rate, as it is growing now. The measure will help us a lot in maintaining the growth of

traffic

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more efficiently.

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the

use

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of public transport can help in reducing the

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traffic but

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traffic, but

for the problem of

pollution

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, we will need to take one more step. We will have to support the universities and

engineers both

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engineers, both

financially and emotionally, so that

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and electrical power engines could be introduced in the market.

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of

which,

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pollution, which

pollution

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can be handled. So, only by increasing prices of gasoline

alone we

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alone, we

cannot

workout

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work out

the solution to these two major problems of

traffic

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and

pollution

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, but some extra measures would be really helpful to us.