It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Some people
eblieve
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that technological developments lead to the loss of traditional culture. I partly agree with
this
claim; while it may be true in the case of some societies, others seem to be unaffected
bt
two things or people together
both
by
but
technology and the modern world. On the one hand, the advances in technology that have driven industrialisation (yönlendiren) in developed countries have certainly
dontributed
bestow a quality on
contributed
to the disappearance of traditional ways of life.
For example
, in pre-
industrail
of or relating to or resulting from industry
industrial
Britain, generations of families grew up in the same small village communities. These communities had a strong sense of identity, due to their shared customs and beliefs.
However
, developments in transport,
communicatons
the discipline that studies the principles of transmitting information and the methods by which it is delivered (as print or radio or television etc.)
communications
and
manufacytring
the act of making something (a product) from raw materials
manufacturing
led to the
disappearence
the act of leaving secretly or without explanation
disappearance
of big families and conventional communities as people moved to the cities in search of work. Nowadays, most British villages are inhabited by commuters, many of whom do not know their closest neighbours.
On the other hand
, in some parts of world traditional cultures are still alive. There are tribes in the Amazon Rainforest,
for example
, that have been completely untouched
bt
Used in specifying adjacent dimensions
by
the technological developments of
developed world
Suggestion
the developed world
. These tribal communities continue to hunt and gather food from the forest, and traditional skills are passed on to children by parents and elders. Other traditional cultures,
such
as farming communities in parts of Africa, are embracing communication technologies. Mobile phones give farmers access to information, from weather predictions to market prices, which
helsp
give help or assistance; be of service
helps
help
them to prosper (
refahlanmak
) and
therefore
support their culture. In summary, many traditional ways of life have been lost
as a result
of advances in technology, but other
taditional
consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
communities have survived and even flourished.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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