Some governments say how many children a family can have in their country. This may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree? give reasons for your answer.

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The amount of children that a family can have is c
ontroled
restrained or managed or kept within certain bounds
controlled
in some countries through taxes.
This
situation could be that the older people increase in some nations but
also
this
may help to control the population.
However
, I don’t agree with the
government
try to say how many children
this
institution should have, because I believe that the reality that the state want to establish could have horrible consequences for the society. The reason for I a
m disagree
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have disagreed
with
this
is since I see is that the p
sychology
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psychological
illness could grow, due to if a couple have one child
this
would do that the p
resion
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present
person
in that person be quite huge.
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lso their
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Also, their
personality will be difficult, for the reason that their parents will try to give everything, so
this
i
ndividue
a human being
individual
l
ikely be
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likely is
is likely being
selfish and individualistic.
For example
, in China the
government
controlled for several years the family group, and
this
made that in
this
country would exist many d
epression.
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depressions
So, that situation o
nly give
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only gives
a lot of d
iseasses.
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
diseases
disease
dresses
On the other hand
, I think that the
government
t
ry
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tries
to control t
he population because in
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the population because
some nations
such
as India or China is i
mposible
not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with
impossible
make that the resources get to everyone.
Then
, the best way to drive the natural sources is through of a law for control the b
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For instance
, in China
this
policy work, due to population could be m
ore low.
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lower
So,
this
way could be a good way of
government
in some countries. To conclude, exist the trend that the some governments say the a
moung
a quantity of money
amount
of a couple can have.
This
policy has made that the illness increase in that c
ountries,
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country
however
it has helped to the economy. N
everthenless,
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Nevertheless
in my opinion, I think that for the better p
sychology health
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psychology, health
is better that every person is free to decide how many children they want to have.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overpopulation
  • social problems
  • environmental problems
  • sustainable future
  • population growth
  • poverty alleviation
  • resource strain
  • government intervention
  • imbalances
  • individual rights
  • education
  • family planning
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