The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada

The bar chart illustrates the places where people can joint free-time activities of three different people groups, namely: native Canadians, people who migrate in English-speaking countries and people do not speak English in other countries. Overall, it clears that Canadians and new migrants born in English-speaking countries tend to go to the cinema;
by contrast
, new migrants non-English-speaking prefer the library to the cinema. The
theater
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
is kind of activity with the lowest percentage of all three people groups. Obviously, the proportion of native Canadians go to the cinema at 70%, compared to approximately 65% of migrants from English-speaking nation and 50% of migrants from other countries.
Nevertheless
, the library is kind of activity with the highest proportion of Canadians is 55%. The percentage of the English-speaking migrants going to the
theater
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
is shorter than the proportion of Canadians about 5%, while the percentage of migrants from non-English-speaking countries is only 10%.

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