Some people believe that governments should ban dangerous sports even though others claim they should have the freedom to choose a sport to their liking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Human beings have been playing games for centuries in order to escape the boredom in their lives. Sports play an important role in cultivating several qualities in
men which
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men, which
makes it an important tool for
society
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societal
reformation but
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reformation, but
some playful activities destroy empathy and encourage violence among the participants. Most of these sports are
also
part of the culture and celebrated every year in order to achieve cultural or personal satisfaction.
However
, these organized activities contribute to loss of both human lives and extinction of species which is why it should be stopped. It is estimated that almost half of the population of Pakistan is composed of youths. These young people often endanger their lives by competing with each other in activities that cost them their lives. In a report published in Daily Dawn in 2012, it was estimated that nearly 200 motorcyclist lost their lives while performing stunts in busy roads.
Hence
, the government should take steps to end these life threatening acts to save lives and promote peace on
streets
Suggestion
the streets
. Many cultural activities involve hunting of specific species in order to obtain divine powers or cultural satisfaction. A notable example is the killing of whales in Japan when they try to beach at the shore. To stop complete extinction, international organization must take steps to prevent people from doing
such
acts of harm. To conclude, dangerous sports should be stopped by the government and international bodies before they inflict loss of lives on both humans and animals. The above mentioned examples clearly showed the consequences of not regulating
such
activities.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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