Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The character of an individual and their changes in the future is vital for the amount of relationships they will make in future ad determines the proportion they contribute to the society, but research has revealed that personality and development is highly depended on the features we posses since birth than the lessons we face in our life. On the one hand, genetics plays an important role in

this

argument as it is obvious that most the individuals often represent their parents in their daily

behavior’s

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

there

Suggestion

There

is a mounting evidence suggesting that genes contribute more to the character of a person, the most salient example is, the neighbours and the people

Suggestion

our close zones point out that our characteristics in certain circumstances are similar to our parent’s

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

Moreover

, we are less likely to experience various events in our childhood and the childhood is important to change the way we have as it is

beleived

accept as true; take to be true

believed

that information obtained at younger periods tend to stay forever throughout the lifetime.

In contrast

, living in a community with various customs and habits will teach a person the difference between a beneficial and harmful character.

For example

, the awareness gained after touching a hot surface is similar to what experiences does to the society, once a mistake is made the consequences of it is realized and the individual tends to avoid repeating the same thing.

For instance

, in a workplace or in classrooms where a person gets punished or detained is a similar process of what lessons does to the life of people. In conclusion, even though genes are important in

determing

having the power or quality of deciding

determining

determine

this

aspect of humans, the external factors and lessons in life contribute more to the well-being of the community.

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Topic Vocabulary:

nature vs. nurture debate
genetic inheritance
personality traits
behavior patterns
heritability
twins studies
malleable characteristics
upbringing
environmental influences
critical periods
language acquisition
worldview
innate traits
personal experiences
psychological development
epigenetics
adaptive behaviors
cultural imprinting
temperament
social conditioning

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